For better, or worse??? This has really got me thinking Liam. Love it.
Yes, quite puzzling (as poetry should ALSO be). It has plenty of room for wondering.
This has such a 'Liam' air to it. I relate to the feeling of isolation in grief and also the sense that it is a very personal and private experience. And above all, grief changes us. Excellent poem, Liam.
Thanks so much for your comments. I like a poem, especially a micropoem, to leave a lot to the reader - this one has a definite meaning for me but I wanted to leave it open for everyone else.Claire, your comment blew me away! Thank you.
thought-provoking and something i can relate to...