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Friday 30 September 2011

the clouds the day most of his son came home

6 comments:

  1. Strong and harsh. A good one, David. Sent shivers down my spine.

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  2. Thank you, my friend. And thanks for providing a space for it.

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  3. Just chilling. Every time I reread it, I still feel as much sorrow as the first time. Excellent work!

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  4. Thank you, Christina. And congrats on your position at Atlas Poetica.

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  5. I agree, chilling. Part of a life-story in one line. Great writing, David!

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