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Friday, 30 September 2011

the clouds the day most of his son came home
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6 comments:

  1. Johannes S. H. Bjerg1 October 2011 at 10:06

    Strong and harsh. A good one, David. Sent shivers down my spine.

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  2. David Caruso1 October 2011 at 16:34

    Thank you, my friend. And thanks for providing a space for it.

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  3. Johannes S. H. Bjerg2 October 2011 at 15:11

    You're welcome, David.

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  4. Christina Nguyen3 October 2011 at 03:05

    Just chilling. Every time I reread it, I still feel as much sorrow as the first time. Excellent work!

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  5. David Caruso4 October 2011 at 18:07

    Thank you, Christina. And congrats on your position at Atlas Poetica.

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  6. ThoseThr3Words-Claire24 October 2011 at 13:56

    I agree, chilling. Part of a life-story in one line. Great writing, David!

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