I love how reading this gives sort of a visual sense of that clumsiness with the repetition and the hyphens that jump out at you. And then the space...the birds finally get off the ground. Well played!
Christina, thank you - exactly what I was going for :)
I love how reading this gives sort of a visual sense of that clumsiness with the repetition and the hyphens that jump out at you. And then the space...the birds finally get off the ground. Well played!
ReplyDeleteChristina, thank you - exactly what I was going for :)
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