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Monday 9 April 2012

clumsy take-off after clumsy take-off           crows

2 comments:

  1. I love how reading this gives sort of a visual sense of that clumsiness with the repetition and the hyphens that jump out at you. And then the space...the birds finally get off the ground. Well played!

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  2. Christina, thank you - exactly what I was going for :)

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